Thursday, 12 September 2013

Informal register to formal register


Informal to formal

INFORMAL 
‘OMG, U dun a awful job paintin my hallway!!! There was mess evrywher and me son tripped over the mess u had left!! It took me forEVER to tidy up and am not happy wiv u and my family is not either and I want a refund for the work u did (which was rubbish) or I am callin a lawyer to handle it trust me’

FORMAL
‘The job done at my house this morning was unsatisfactory. Unfortunately you had carelessly left your equipment around my house, which caused an absolute wreck and resulted in my young child injuring himself later that day. Furthermore me and my family have spent an unreasonable amount of time clearling this catastrophe you have left behind. This is not acceptable and I am utterly displeased with your service. I am requesting an immediate refund or legal action will be sought. 
Thank You.' 

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